Birthday · for a wife
The finished song
Exactly as the customer wrote it, typos included. Everything in the song came from here.
We met on line on a dating app if you don't pay any fees you can only browse and read responses but you can't respond unless you're paid I always paid so I could send messages so one day the site gave her some free time and she left her number and the rest is history.she jokes with her best friend how she used the dating site with out a credit card my wife was made an offer from the dating site about using her profile for advertising she turned it down her profile had that many views my wife is very beautiful fotogentic lady. How I chose my wifes profile was one of three beautiful women that I didn't think I was good enough or in there league so I just sent a message to each one Hi beautiful and by the grace of God she was the only one that answered with the free time she was allowed from the site she left her number.
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The personal details from what they typed, and the line each one became.
| In the story | In the song |
|---|---|
| Myrna | "Oh honey me, you're my light in the storm,"The song is dedicated to Myrna, the recipient. |
| met on a dating app | "Browsing dreams in digital light,"Their relationship began through online dating. |
| left her number | "You left your number, a sign from above,"Myrna's action led to their connection. |
| beautiful and photogenic | "Beautiful and photogenic, you outshine the rest,"Describes Myrna's captivating appearance. |
| grace of God | "By the grace of God, our paths entwined,"They feel their meeting was divinely guided. |
R&B, emotional, male vocal, 2:56 long. The customer heard a preview before paying, then received this as an MP3. It is one of the birthday songs we have made.
Why this one works
A long, rambling story with one great detail: she used the dating site without ever paying for it, and he always did. The lyrics keep that joke in the first verse and treat the rest of the story as the frame around it. A funny, specific detail did more than a page of compliments would have.
This song came from 168 words. If you are writing yours, the details that carried this one were the kind worth copying:
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4.9/5 · 1,000+ reviewsROBERT
CA · Verified on Trustpilot
I hesitated in doing this song thing, I was worried about a scam or up sales. They produced what they promised, for what they quoted and it turned out fantastic. It was for my wife's Birthday and her tears were testimony to how well the song was created. I highly recommend this service.
Reezwan Popat
GB · Verified on Trustpilot
Easy and really brilliant! Such a wonderful gift for my wife's 50th and I know she'll love it! Erik was fantastic – possibly the best customer service I've ever had. Really responsive and helpful. Thank you :)
Paul collins
AU · Verified on Trustpilot
I decided to have a look at this for my wife's Birthday and I have been blown away by how good this song really is for us. I was sceptical as well, but First time I heard it, I couldn't play it all the way through because I was crying and missing most of it. Honestly the best money I've every spent. I had originally had a duet, but decided to change it and Erik sorted it out in a couple of hours for free. All I can say is thank you Erik, I'm going to recommend your site to everyone of my friends. It's so personnel I love it. Best experience ever!!!!!
Don Epperly
US · Verified on Trustpilot
Great service great song. Had an error on my email address and didn’t get it right away. Took awhile to track down through the credit card billing company. Once imgot ahold of the correct email you fixed the problem just in time. I received the song at 8pm on my wife’s birthday. The perfect end to a great day celebrating her.
Marva Lubben
US · Verified on Trustpilot
I gave a song to my husband for his birthday. At first he started listening and you could see his face change as he realized it was about us. He sat up straighter, looked over at me and wiped his eyes, and you could see that he loved it. But I think he was so shocked that it didn't really sink in until the 2nd time he listened to it and followed the words - then he really cried! Now he wants all the kids, our family and friends to hear it too.
Larry O'callahan
US · Verified on Trustpilot
She started listening, then her face went blank. Here started running down her face. She loved it. Said it was the best birthday present she has ever gotten in 73 years. Thank you for the song and the memories.
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