Apology · for a boyfriend
The finished song
Exactly as the customer wrote it, typos included. Everything in the song came from here.
Found him when I wasn’t looking. First date was to prom. Relationship started like a wildfire fast . Had bad time and good times and we managed to make it through. Lot of adventures lake trips baseball and football games Vegas nights with me by your side at the roulette table to me standing and waiting for you while security pat you down going into the Wizard of Oz. Jumping on the back of a Sea-Doo to travel from Long Beach to Catalina Islands, when you didn’t throw me off, that’s when I knew I was in love..we had so many plans. I remember the first time you said you had me when you brought me flowers with a card asking me to be your girlfriend making sure I had an amazing dinner and delicious cookies every night. I love the way you smiled and shook your head as I danced around the house. They miss waking up and making your coffee. I love and miss everything about you. We were only together for eight months, but you made me very happy in that short time. I’m sorry I lost us.
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The personal details from what they typed, and the line each one became.
| In the story | In the song |
|---|---|
| Jason | "Jason You will always be my forever,"The recipient's name, central to the song's message. |
| first date was to prom | "Prom night under the stars,"Their relationship began with a memorable prom night. |
| Vegas nights with me by your side | "Lake trips and Vegas nights,"Shared adventures and memories in Vegas. |
| flowers with a card | "Remember those flowers and card,"A significant gesture that marked their relationship's start. |
| together for eight months | "Eight months of pure happiness,"The duration of their impactful relationship. |
Soft rock, emotional, female vocal, 3:14 long. The customer heard a preview before paying, then received this as an MP3. It is one of the apology songs we have made.
Why this one works
Filed as friend but he was her boyfriend. One typo in the story ('They miss waking up') worth fixing on the page.
This song came from 195 words. If you are writing yours, the details that carried this one were the kind worth copying:
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4.9/5 · 1,000+ reviewsGeorge
CA · Verified on Trustpilot
The song incorporated all the elements that I submitted and the final product was better than I could have hoped for. As I had one revision, customer service was exceptional in dealing with my ineptitude. I am sure the song would have the desired impact, but she hasn't heard it yet. Regardless, if I have another breakup, I would use Beatjar to write me another apology song.
Valued Client
US · Verified on Trustpilot
I wrote everything I ever wanted to say to my spouse about how he has hurt me. Put in ai translate in my phone notes. Pasted that translation into beatjar. They made lyrics from it. I adjusted the lyrics to my perfection. Downloaded 1st song. Clicked redo to get another version. Love Both songs!
Bobbie Wiza
US · Verified on Trustpilot
I never thought something so simple could be so meaningful to someone. I had a song created for my boyfriend for a Christmas gift. By the beginning of the chorus, he was wiping away tears! I can't wait to do another one for him again soon!
Lennie Isip
US · Verified on Trustpilot
My boyfriend, Jowa, was so surprised and deeply touched by the songs I gave him. He became emotional, hugged me tightly, and told me that it was the best Christmas present he has ever received. It wasn't the expensive gifts that mattered, but the song that holds so much meaning for him. It represents our story and showcases how much I love him. He had teary eyes, and I know he will forever cherish it.
Paula Piotraschke
US · Verified on Trustpilot
This is the best gift created by beatjar.com. I will be giving the song to my boyfriend at on Christmas Day. I am doing everything not to share this until then. I have been listening to it. It brings joy and tears to my eyes. Thank you for helping me create my storyline song.
Steph Fix
US · Verified on Trustpilot
Absolutely should do. I made 2 songs 1 for my boyfriend who truly is our world and 2 for my mom who just lost her mom this month. The reactions and emotions were more than anything they could unwrap. I highly suggest this as a gift.
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