Surprise · for a boyfriend
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Remember when you told me I need to find a boyfriend to take care of me then I said ok “Can you be my boyfriend?” Ypu quickly say “no” but since Im stubborn June 08 you finally said “yes” . Things are not easy ypu are conservative, I’m free spirit but we manage to meet halfway. drinking ABC juice in SRG Building to Bittergourd juice in Nomads Building. My coffee buddy, food buddy and movie buddy. You will ask coffee in the morning and I will say yes but give me hug first for five minutes. Without missed, You will ask me if I want breakfast? You’ll prder breakefast for me? If I say no then you will say whatabout lunch? People see me tough and strict but with you I’m a baby. No matter how stressful , hard my day is once I reach home all melts away because ypu are my peace.
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The personal details from what they typed, and the line each one became.
| In the story | In the song |
|---|---|
| Senthil | "Then I asked, "Can you be mine?""The recipient's name, central to their relationship. |
| June 08 | "June 08, your yes became our sign."The date when their relationship officially began. |
| conservative, I'm free spirit | "You're conservative, I'm a free spirit,"Describes their contrasting personalities. |
| ABC juice in SRG | "From ABC juice in SRG to bittergourd in Nomads,"A shared ritual at specific locations. |
| coffee call, hug for five minutes | "Every morning starts with your coffee call,"A daily morning ritual that strengthens their bond. |
| my peace after a long, hard day | "My peace after a long, hard day."Senthil provides comfort and relief from stress. |
R&B, emotional, female vocal, 3:33 long. The customer heard a preview before paying, then received this as an MP3.
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Bridge hints at a goodbye and lists private pet names; consider trimming that line before publishing the lyrics.
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4.9/5 · 1,000+ reviewsRae Martin
NZ · Verified on Trustpilot
Got my song yesterday for a surprise for my husband. We were blown away how good it was, great personal lyrics, and the vocal and tune were superb. So emotional to listen to it. When Steve heard the lyrics "my father smiled and said You'll marry that boy one day" , he realised it was about him. He was very moved. We keep on listening to it and I printed the lyrics for him.Thanks Erik, wonderful job. Absolutely love it.
Graham Cathcart
GB · Verified on Trustpilot
Can't recommend this enough. The delight/surprise on my wife's face when I put this on in the car, was priceless. Great service, the song was emailed and easily downloaded to my Spotify within 15 minutes. If you're reading this, you're obviously thinking about doing it. So trust me, just do it, they (and you) will love it.
T.N.T.
US · Verified on Trustpilot
What a neat idea! I came across this on social media and thought it would be fun to surprise my Hubby. I entered a few distinctive details to our relationship, made my song choices, and within 5 minutes I had a song that we are both swoon over! I highly doubt this will be my last purchase with BeatJar!
Bobbie Wiza
US · Verified on Trustpilot
I never thought something so simple could be so meaningful to someone. I had a song created for my boyfriend for a Christmas gift. By the beginning of the chorus, he was wiping away tears! I can't wait to do another one for him again soon!
Lennie Isip
US · Verified on Trustpilot
My boyfriend, Jowa, was so surprised and deeply touched by the songs I gave him. He became emotional, hugged me tightly, and told me that it was the best Christmas present he has ever received. It wasn't the expensive gifts that mattered, but the song that holds so much meaning for him. It represents our story and showcases how much I love him. He had teary eyes, and I know he will forever cherish it.
Paula Piotraschke
US · Verified on Trustpilot
This is the best gift created by beatjar.com. I will be giving the song to my boyfriend at on Christmas Day. I am doing everything not to share this until then. I have been listening to it. It brings joy and tears to my eyes. Thank you for helping me create my storyline song.
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