Apology · for a daughter
The finished song
Exactly as the customer wrote it, typos included. Everything in the song came from here.
My daughter Who was born in 1996 that was the first day that I pre-and asked for, and I was granted, a beautiful daughter who I love and adore so much and I love to see her smile I am sorry that I miss so much of your life that I was not there when you needed me I promise you from this day forward I will be there to hold your hand when you need me. I will have my shoulder available for you when you need it to lean on. I will lift you up when you’re down. I will wipe your tears when I’m around, I will show you as much love that I can show you that a fault they can give I would give it. I love you Oraneisha you are my heart. You are my love. There’s only two women in my life and that is you and my wife Who, dear to my heart I love you, my daughter, my sweet princess I would never let you down again from this day for.
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The personal details from what they typed, and the line each one became.
| In the story | In the song |
|---|---|
| Oraneisha | "Oraneisha, my heart, my sweet princess"The recipient's name, showing deep personal connection. |
| born in 1996 | "The day you were born, my world was blessed"Significant life event marking the start of their bond. |
| sorry that I miss so much | "I'm sorry for the moments I wasn't there"Regret for past absence in her life. |
| promise you from this day forward | "But from this day forward, I promise anew"Commitment to being present and supportive. |
| two women in my life | "Two women in my life, you and my wife"Expresses the importance of his daughter and wife. |
R&B, soulful, female vocal, 3:50 long. The customer heard a preview before paying, then received this as an MP3. It is one of the apology songs we have made.
Why this one works
Filed as wife but the song is entirely for his daughter. Story is rambling, so quote only the promise lines in page copy.
This song came from 182 words. If you are writing yours, the details that carried this one were the kind worth copying:
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4.9/5 · 1,000+ reviewsGeorge
CA · Verified on Trustpilot
The song incorporated all the elements that I submitted and the final product was better than I could have hoped for. As I had one revision, customer service was exceptional in dealing with my ineptitude. I am sure the song would have the desired impact, but she hasn't heard it yet. Regardless, if I have another breakup, I would use Beatjar to write me another apology song.
Valued Client
US · Verified on Trustpilot
I wrote everything I ever wanted to say to my spouse about how he has hurt me. Put in ai translate in my phone notes. Pasted that translation into beatjar. They made lyrics from it. I adjusted the lyrics to my perfection. Downloaded 1st song. Clicked redo to get another version. Love Both songs!
Paul Vogel
US · Verified on Trustpilot
The song really hit home she was very emotional and was surprised that the song had been about us and our family all the members of my family son, daughter,and grandchildren heard it and loved the song. It really was the highlight of the evening. Thanks to everyone involved in making this song. I would and will recommend Beat Jar to my friends and relatives.
Mouse E
CA · Verified on Trustpilot
I still have tears in my eyes, the song created is absolutely perfect! The ability to edit the lyrics easily is nice but I have to say, I didn’t need to change a word in the song that was created from what I had submitted. It also came within minutes into my inbox. So impressed, if you’re on the fence like I was feeling it’s too good to be true … jump on and do it, I know you won’t regret it. I know I don’t and am so excited to give it to my daughter at her engagement celebration!
Samantha
AU · Verified on Trustpilot
My daughter was listening, she clued on pretty fast as this is the fourth song I’ve ordered from Beat Jar. Her huge smile, and our memories made me cry, she kept saying aaaw mum each line she heard. It’s such a great app. I’ve made for my mum my partner and now 2 of my daughters. So glad I stumbled upon it
Alisa Marie Troccia
US · Verified on Trustpilot
I ordered a custom song for my daughter's birthday. She absolutely loved it. She is over in the Netherlands studying, and it was the perfect way to feel connected to her and give her a special and unique gift that made it feel like I was a little closer.
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